An English-speaking friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Offer to find a place for him / her to live • Give advice about how to find a part-time job • Give information on where he / she can learn your language

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Dear Sam, I am really excited that you have

finally

decided to study in Bangalore, India.

Although

, moving to another country must be really hectic but I can help you with that. You are most welcome to stay at my house until you find a place to say. Meanwhile, I know an apartment that will get empty around that time you come here. If you are interested, I can talk to the landlord. If not, I can help you to find places to move. While you are enrolled in the university, it is best you find part-time work that can help with your expenses. I would recommend you to use the university’s job portal website to keep an eye on the latest jobs.

Also

, you can attend online seminars about different ways to find and apply for work which is usually conducted by your placement centre.

Also

, the most important thing is that while you live here, you would need to learn the local language. If you want to survive here you need to learn

this

language. It might be a bit hard to learn it at

first

but

then

it will get easy. Is it really hard to learn a new language? You can take

this

class in your institution itself. All the best for your studies. Looking forward to meeting you soon. With Kind Regards, Tejas

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secondly
thirdly
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moreover
also
for example
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however
although
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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

228 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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