You have bought an electronic equipment and within two days problem started occurring. Write a letter to the shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product & services. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem .

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Dear Sir writing

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epistle to express utter annoyance with my recent purchase from your store .

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week. I bought a mixer grinder of 1000 watts with 3 jars of different sizes. For a long ,time I have been using numerous products from your reputated shop and have never been disappointed but

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purchase made me upset. Two days back when I started to use it

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It made a strange noise and after using it for 2 days it stopped working.

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, I referred to 'User 's manual' to troubleshoot

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technical glitch. I followed all instructions but had no luck. As

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product is under guarantee so I would like you to kindly repair it or exchange it as earliest. I need

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urgently so it would be better if you send one of your servicemen to my house so that he can find the actual problem or suggest an appropriate solution .I do not have too much time to come again to your store. looking for a quick and prompt response from your end. yours sincerely Ritu Dhiman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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182 words

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