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Families who do not send their children to government financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support state education. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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Beyond doubt,
parents
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 at present have many options in terms of
schools
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 to choose for their children
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 as public
schools
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, private
schools
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 and international
schools
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, if they send their
kids
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 to private
schools
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, they should not be required to pay
taxes
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however
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 I have a different opinion. Commencing with, being responsible citizens they have to pay
education
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taxes
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 as it will support, the government and underprivileged community.
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, funds collected from the people are used for promoting
education
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 in poor societies which help in decreasing illiteracy among those people.
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 to
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, it will
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 boost the economy of the nation as an amount paid by people will be spent on the good fare of the society.
Taxes
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 are the only mean by which the public purse is getting filled.
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, a group of thoughts believe that It is not always true that who send their children to private or international school come from
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 families. Since they want to teach their
kids
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 in the best
schools
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 so that
kids
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 could get admissions in top universities, somehow, they afford the high fees of private
schools
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. High fees of
schools
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 create a burden In
parents
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 and they can not pay
taxes
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. Apart from
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, some
parents
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 claim that why do they pay
taxes
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 as they are not getting any benefit from the government in terms of school fees
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 as they buy books, uniforms and other materials for their
kids
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 by themselves . To conclude, I strongly disagree with that viewpoint because paying
taxes
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 can help the state in improving the
education
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 system.
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, it is recommended that
parents
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 should pay
taxes
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 to encourage their state
education
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.
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