Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

It is often argued that in every country renewable
energy
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as solar
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can replace conventional
energy
to support residential's power
source
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.
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using
sun
power have many
beneficial
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, I think it
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also
have negative sides. On the one hand,
advantages
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of using solar
panel
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are
environmental
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friendly and easy to use.
Government
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around the world try to replace conventional
energy
such
as fossil fuel
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renewable
energy
like
solar
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a solar
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panel
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in purpose to decrease carbon
polution
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pollution
. Solar panels are widely used compared to
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unconventional power source since the appliance is compact and easy to install
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of China choose
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panel
to decrease carbon
polution
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pollution
because it is easy to implement. That's why
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solar
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panel
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have many beneficial
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country
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that
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many
sun
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. It is only can absorb heat from the
sun
if the weather is clear
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rain or cloud.
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of Indonesia,
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have enough sunlight but have high rainfall intensity so
solar
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panel
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can operate optimally.
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,
sun
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energy
have
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many negative
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In conclusion, though solar
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positive point
such
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and easy to implement , I think it
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also
have drawback like only can operate in sunny weather.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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