You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear ABC team,
I am writing
this
letter with sheer disappointment about the recent purchases of a WIFI Router from one of your Franchise here at DHA.Linking Words
However
,It's been almost a month that I have been following up on a call to a representative for the solution of an utter problem.Linking Words
Hence
,No help so far.
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Firstly
,My job demands a very High-Speed network,Since I work for an online company,Linking Words
Therefore
,The issue has started the very Linking Words
next
day of buying the device,Linking Words
Although
,despite launching a complaint to the shop over the phone about the connecting issue,they asked me to check the Red and Blue light if it is on or off.I switched it on but it did not work.Linking Words
Although
,I found out the machine is not blinking.Imagine how could equipment work If it's not showing a signal?
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Nevertheless
,Fifteen days passed by and I told them,Linking Words
In addition
,that I had to submit my Project Report,for ,that I need proper connectivity,Linking Words
Secondly
,Not only did I fail to submit the assignment,my Boss threatened to Fire me from my Job.In fact,Once a Representative visited .I specifically wrote on the visit report that gets Linking Words
this
useless gadget changed.Ever since Linking Words
then
nobody showed up.
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Subsequently
,After vigorous follow-ups and grievances,I am forced to write to you directly.Linking Words
However
,all I want is either to change my apparatus else get me a new connection with separate wiring. Linking Words
Lastly
, It would be better if my problem gets resolved within 3 days ,as I have already suffered a lot.If the company does not solve it right away I will surely reach out to the MD of your association and will write about your bad services on social media too.
Looking forward to seeing a response.
Yours Faithfully,
ZFLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite