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With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are some controversial perspectives heating a debate over the fast development of
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 as smartphones, tablets and other mobile devices. While
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 advancement has its own pros and cons, I would contend that its
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 still outweigh its advantages.
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technology
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 has globally connected everyone
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 and makes human’s life more convenient. Since
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technology
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 was created,
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 can communicate with each other much more easily than before, which made our life more comfortable.
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, since Alexander Graham Bell invented the telephone,
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 can communicate with each other without any difficulties. Those advantages have clearly proved that
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 is potentially made if
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society uses it correctly.
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, these usages of
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 out some
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. While those
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 of
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are
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 well-known, it would be unfair if the counterpart is ignored.
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technology
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 causes a very significant phenomenon in society, which is laziness. With the advancement of
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technology
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,
people
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 are more likely to rely on it. To give an instance,
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 of having a face-to-face conversation, teenagers prefer having an online meeting because of its convenience, which causes
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 laziness. Not denying
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 of
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, its bad affection is more likely to be seen. If there are not any solutions for society’s laziness caused by
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, the
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 will significantly exist. Overall,
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technology
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 has its own advantages and
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 those
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 can be noticed more easily. If
people
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 use
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technology
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 in a reasonable way, it will be very helpful.
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