All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

Learning a new
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into school
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when their first class, followed by reasonable explanations. The main benefit to beginning to learn a new
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at an early
age
is much easier than trying to learn later
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because the
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is still developing. Mexico is
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example, where education establishment has already consisted
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for first-year pupils.
Furthermore
, baby brains have additional special skills for second-
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before ten. Patricia Kuhl explains how
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differentiate between all sounds across all languages, where TED Talk happening in England. They begin to solely discriminate between the
language
sounds which are essential to form meaning.
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age
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and twelve.
Lastly
, learning another
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is being able to communicate with more people from different cultures. As they grow and mature, they will be able to travel to many places and
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with many
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from all around the world building tolerance and application for cultural differences. Young children are confused by the introduction of multiple languages at the same time.
Whereas
totally different intellectual problems are essential, of course, I feel
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viewpoint, particularly considering bilingual youngsters who are becoming
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expert problem-solving and creative
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To conclude
, I believe that studying early is
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wiser, not just
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faster and easier, but
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reasons.
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