These days in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers particulary in secondry school. What are the reasons for this and how could the problem be solved.

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the issues and how to solve them.
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problem in many developing
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is low income. They have
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at work
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and guiding
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. To support high
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for them,
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minimal
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wages, so they can focus to work without worry something else.
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another
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they
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interest to be a
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, some of the best fresh graduate
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tend to be a researcher or
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because it is more challenging.
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profession
demand
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someone to do routine activity and for some
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it is not challenging and boring. Changing the existing curriculum to allow
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and
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some research could be a challenge for them.
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that
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teacher
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impact
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them.
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do not find room for improvement in that profession and school must provide it to attract them to be one of educator In conclusion, there
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some
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young people do not
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to be a
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boring. In purpose to increase the interest,
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must change the regulation about minimum wages and curriculum to allow
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some
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research
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challenge
them.
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