These days in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers particulary in secondry school. What are the reasons for this and how could the problem be solved.
It is often
agued
that number of people who wants to be a Correct your spelling
argued
teacher
in secondary are decreasing by the time. This
could be caused by some problem. In this
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I will explain Add a comma
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about
the issues and how to solve them.
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First
of all, educator
problem in many developing Correct article usage
the educator
country
is low income. They have Change to a plural noun
countries
many
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much
responsibility
at work Change to a plural noun
responsibilities
such
as giving Add an article
a lesson
the lesson
lesson
and guiding Fix the agreement mistake
lessons
student
attitude
. To support high Fix the agreement mistake
attitudes
expectation
for them, Fix the agreement mistake
expectations
government
must regulate Add an article
the government
about
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apply
minimal
wages, so they can focus to work without worry something else. Replace the word
minimum
For instance
, junior high school teachers must teach about biology, in
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apply
another
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apply
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and
hand
they Add a comma
,hand
also
must supervise the scholar attitude in the class. That's why higher income could increase youngster
interest to be a Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
teacher
.
Secondly
, some of the best fresh graduate student
tend to be a researcher or Change to a plural noun
students
entrepreneur
because it is more challenging. Fix the agreement mistake
entrepreneurs
Educator
profession Correct article usage
The educator
demand
someone to do routine activity and for some Change the verb form
demands
people
it is not challenging and boring. Changing the existing curriculum to allow Add a comma
,people
teacher
and Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
student
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students
do
some research could be a challenge for them. Fix the infinitive
to do
For example
, Singapore have curriculum
that Add an article
a curriculum
allow
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allows
teacher
and student
in junior high school to do a
research, it caused Remove the article
apply
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positive
possitive
impact Correct article usage
a possitive
for
them. Change preposition
on
Thus
, youngster
do not find room for improvement in that profession and school must provide it to attract them to be one of educator
In conclusion, there Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
are
some Change the verb form
is
problem
that Fix the agreement mistake
problems
cause
young people do not Change the verb form
causes
want
to be a Fix the infinitive
to want
teacher
such
as low salary and the profession is
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being
to
boring. In purpose to increase the interest, Replace the word
too
government
must change the regulation about minimum wages and curriculum to allow Add an article
the government
scholar
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scholars
do
some Fix the infinitive
to do
reasearch
to Correct your spelling
research
challange
them.Correct your spelling
challenge
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