Increasing the price Of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?
It is often argued that the rising of
oil
price decrease traffic jam and air pollution. Use synonyms
Although
there Linking Words
are
Change the verb form
is
positive
Add an article
a positive
the positive
point
of increasing the price, I think there Fix the agreement mistake
points
are
Change the verb form
is
also
Linking Words
negative
Add an article
a negative
the negative
point
of that policy.
Fix the agreement mistake
points
In
the one hand, the rising Change preposition
On
of
Change preposition
apply
amount
of Add an article
the amount
money
to buy Use synonyms
petrol
cause people harder to buy it. People either in Use synonyms
urban
or rural Add an article
the urban
area
need to Fix the agreement mistake
areas
spent
their Change the form of the verb
spend
money
Use synonyms
to
daily life including Change preposition
on
for
transport. If it is hard to buy, many people choose Change preposition
apply
another modes
of transportation. Replace the adjective
another mode
other modes
For example
, Linking Words
Correct article usage
the community
community
move to Fix the agreement mistake
communities
unmotorized
Add an article
the unmotorized
an unmotorized
vehicle
Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
such
as Linking Words
bicycle
to save their Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
money
. That's whyUse synonyms
,
higher Remove the comma
apply
petrol
price lead to Use synonyms
descrease
number of cars operated.
Correct your spelling
decrease
decreased
In
the other hand, high Change preposition
On
petrol
Use synonyms
cost
will lead to Fix the agreement mistake
costs
increase
Correct article usage
an increase
of
Change preposition
in
amount
of Add an article
the amount
money
to buy basic needs. It is caused by rising expenditures for Use synonyms
logistic
Add an article
the logistic
company
since Fix the agreement mistake
companies
oil
is one of the cost Use synonyms
component
. That condition will affect another aspect of Change to a plural noun
components
economy
Add an article
the economy
such
as inflation. Linking Words
For instance
, in 2006 there are escalate Linking Words
of
Change preposition
in
oil
in Indonesia which cause big inflation and Use synonyms
lead
to starvation of basic needs. Wrong verb form
led
Thus
, Linking Words
increase
Correct article usage
the increase
of
Change preposition
in
oil
cause Use synonyms
Correct article usage
an economics
economics
impact.
In conclusion, though there are Replace the word
economic
beneficial
of Replace the word
benefits
petrol
increase Use synonyms
such
as less traffic jam and air pollution, Linking Words
i
think some drawback followed after the increasing like economics impact.Change the capitalization
I
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite