You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter Describe the work you have been doing Explain why you can no longer do this work Recommend another person who is interested in the work

Dear sir, I am writing to express my apologies regards to not being capable to extend our cooperation. I am Zahra is childcare volunteer in your company. I have been in charge of children. Not only in a range of kids age but
also
teenagers. I used to guide them in their lessons.
Moreover
, I looked after them when they were alone at home.
Although
my career is unpaid, I am fascinated by it. Unfortunately, nowadays I cannot do my favourite job because I am attending cookery class and I am too snowed under.
Furthermore
, my mother will be coming to my home
next
week and I should allocate my time to her. If I am allowed to suggest, one of my close friends is searching for an opportunity to help charity, I can introduce her to your structure. She is a really reliable and responsible girl and
also
she doesn't need money. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours, Z.l
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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  • despite

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