You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the Student Accommodation Officer of local college. In your letter, you should tell: - where your apartment is located - when the room will be available - what your requirements for a student to stay there are Begin your letter as follow: Dear…,

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to let you know that I have a spare room in my flat that I would like to a student of your college on rent. My flat has three bedrooms with attached bathrooms, a kitchen and a living room. The flat is located on Ashram Road, Ahmedabad which is near the Sabarmati Riverfront. All basic facilities are available near my apartment. Currently, one bedroom is on rent to a pupil but he will leave that space
next
month because he wants to go abroad for
further
education, so a student of your college can be rented that room
next
month. There are some terms and conditions which should be followed by a pupil which are advance deposit will be Rs.5000 and if he / she wants to leave that space, one will have to say before two months.
Moreover
, there is a time limit to close the door at 10:PM and late-night parties and other events are not allowed. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Parth Patel
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