Marketing and promotion is the key to a succesful business. To what extend do you agree?

Marketing and promotion
is
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what
make
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a
business
successful.
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essay will discuss promotion and marketing
is
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one
of the
key
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of
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successful
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, despite a good
product
or
service
is
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the main factor to
successful
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a successful
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business
. In my
opinion
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both are responsible for
successful
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a successful
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business
. Marketing is essential to make a
business
profitable and
also
stand up from other big
business
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businesses
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. Marketing has the function of
introduced
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and
promoted
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promoting
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product
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products
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or
service
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services
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to
potencial
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potential
customers. Without marking the
potencial
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potential
costumers
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customers
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may never be aware of your
business
offering and the
business
may not able to progress and succeed. Marketing is beneficial and so name ways, but a good
product
and
service
is
essencial
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essential
to retain
client
, for
exemplo
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example
, if
one
company have
a
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good marketing but do not offer good
service
, the clients will
may
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not come back or
one
small company have a good
product
,
however
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do not have marketing,
first
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the
potencial
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potential
clients will never know about the
product
and
service
and
this
may lead to sales crash. Once your
product
, reached
the
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potencial
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potential
costumers
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customers
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, it
increase
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the
potencial
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potential
to purchase their
product
. In
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addition
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addiction
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addition
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to that when
i
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client
have good experience with
one
product
or
service
, they will
recomende
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recommend
recommended
for friends or family, rising
they
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their
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sales; without employing marketing strategies. In conclusion, marketing and good
product
/
service
complement each other, a
business
can not be successful without
this
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key features,
one
is responsible to make
client
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the client
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aware of a
product
/
service
and
other
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is what
make
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retain
client
, which bring more money in
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term.
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  • Visibility
  • Market recognition
  • Digital marketing
  • Social media
  • Search Engine Optimization (SEO)
  • Online advertising
  • Consumer behavior
  • Brand loyalty
  • Purchasing decisions
  • Brand identity
  • Ethical concerns
  • Financial burden
  • Innovation
  • Saturated market
  • Customer engagement
  • Traditional vs. modern marketing
  • Market trends
  • Feedback analysis
  • Adaptability
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