In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Success is associated with hard-working in many definitions. Tiredness effort is emphasized by some nations in order to catch all of the dreams and will of

children

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, to be dynamic and hopeful about acquiring aims. Provided that, parents and authorities insist extensively on

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perspective could end in disappointment. In

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of nurturing

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of all kinds of achievement

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strict try will be elaborate. In terms of learning that permanent attempting is the key to hitting every goal. It might play an encouraging role to keep pushing and not give up by any spark of defeat. Due to that, the whole society would be more proactive, which increases the chance of progressing.

For instance

, India has been developed in economical features and science despite the massive population owing to

this

collective thinking system. The more crucial benefit could be the general influence of persistence, which prevents being pleased in chaos.

Therefore

, if

children

assume they are able to achieve everything, probably would make an effort to solve their personal and social problems

instead

of passively acting.

On the other hand

, ignoring the obligations and limited capacity of individuals and

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start unrelated adventures that can waste

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's energy.

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the real skill would not flourish. To give an example, if a child is inherited talented in arts-based subjects by trusting to trying as

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enough means to be an engineer or doctor he can be frustrated about catering his needs and even lose the chance to perform as an innovative or renowned artist.

Hence

, it could be an undeniable flaw that

children

have been taught to neglect their confined abilities and have unrealistic hopes to occupy anything they want just by working. In summary, telling

children

that they are unrestricted capable of meeting any desire by firmly

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have some advantages like shaping them eager hard-workers is visible.

Nevertheless

, they should be learned to think in a rational way about reality in order to dedicate their

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towards setting some goals which are fit to them.