You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child Write a letter to the parents.In your letter •explain why you would like the job •give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. •say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to apply for a job advertised in an Australian magazine

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Sunday, for a Nany of Six-year-old child.

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,I would like to draw your attention to the said Job for two reasons.

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, It's been a month since I have just completed my

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Semester,So, I am all free and available for

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Job.Since I did Master in Child Psychology.

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assignment would help me to understand more.

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,I need to stay here until my PhD programme starts.

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why I find it very relevant to my field and support me financially too.

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, As I mentioned my thesis will be on the same subject and I get along very well with children.Despite getting theoretical , the knowledge I may get a chance to learn

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hand.

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,Meanwhile, by the time your child is in school one take tuition.

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, I would like you to spare me 2 hours daily so that I can visit the library for my upcoming assignment.

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,It will be a great help and support If you could hire and send an invitation letter so that I could apply for the 'Stay in application' . I will be looking forward to seeing a positive response from you. Best Regards, Zunaira Faiz

Submitted by zunaira.faiz on Mon Feb 07 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

208 words

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