You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child Write a letter to the parents.In your letter •explain why you would like the job •give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. •say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to apply for a job advertised in an Australian magazine

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Sunday, for a Nany of Six-year-old child.

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,I would like to draw your attention to the said Job for two reasons.

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, It's been a month since I have just completed my

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Semester,So, I am all free and available for

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Job.Since I did Master in Child Psychology.

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assignment would help me to understand more.

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,I need to stay here until my PhD programme starts.

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why I find it very relevant to my field and support me financially too.

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, As I mentioned my thesis will be on the same subject and I get along very well with children.Despite getting theoretical , the knowledge I may get a chance to learn

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hand.

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,Meanwhile, by the time your child is in school one take tuition.

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, I would like you to spare me 2 hours daily so that I can visit the library for my upcoming assignment.

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,It will be a great help and support If you could hire and send an invitation letter so that I could apply for the 'Stay in application' . I will be looking forward to seeing a positive response from you. Best Regards, Zunaira Faiz

zunaira.faizMon Feb 07 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

208 words

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The Greeting

Some children spend hours every day on their smart phones Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all the shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?