You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child Write a letter to the parents.In your letter •explain why you would like the job •give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. •say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to apply for a job advertised in an Australian magazine

this

Sunday, for a Nany of Six-year-old child.

However

,I would like to draw your attention to the said Job for two reasons.

Firstly

, It's been a month since I have just completed my

last

Semester,So, I am all free and available for

this

Job.Since I did Master in Child Psychology.

This

assignment would help me to understand more.

However

,I need to stay here until my PhD programme starts.

That is

why I find it very relevant to my field and support me financially too.

Secondly

, As I mentioned my thesis will be on the same subject and I get along very well with children.Despite getting theoretical , the knowledge I may get a chance to learn

first

hand.

Also

,Meanwhile, by the time your child is in school one take tuition.

Finally

, I would like you to spare me 2 hours daily so that I can visit the library for my upcoming assignment.

Also

,It will be a great help and support If you could hire and send an invitation letter so that I could apply for the 'Stay in application' . I will be looking forward to seeing a positive response from you. Best Regards, Zunaira Faiz

Submitted by zunaira.faiz on Mon Feb 07 2022

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10 paragraphs

208 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this.

Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadavantages?

IT has been argued, that the main goal of science is to improve the people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this Information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.