living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems to what extent do you agree or disagree?
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foreign
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may accompany with some social and practical issues. In my perspective, for the first
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foreign
this
country
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. However
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. For instance
, China celebrate
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