A friend of yours is thinking of going on a campus holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follow: Dear….,
Dear Anna
How's it going? Hope you are doing well and am very excited to go with you
on
camping coming Change preposition
apply
saturday
.
I think you will enjoying a lot because the place where we are going is awesome. The weather is nice Change the capitalization
Saturday
in
these days so we gonna spend some time on Change preposition
apply
beach
as well . Add an article
the beach
In these
days there is Change preposition
These
a
Correct article usage
apply
markets
in the evening as people came from different countries . Change the noun form
market
Also
one more thing we will do cycling
and Add a missing verb
is cycling
also
spent time in the night near the jungle .
Apart from this
some disadvanges
like in Correct your spelling
disadvantages
this
season flies in the night so that's why its
Replace the word
it's
it is
little
difficult to sleep at night and Correct article usage
a little
also
we can't able to choose our favourite place because lots of school children and other people come to enjoy their holidays . Other
thing is that at the moment on that side road was closed due to construction work .
Change the wording
Another
Correct your spelling
I
In
think in the middle of Correct your spelling
I
summer
months is best for us to go Correct article usage
the summer
for
camping as Change preposition
apply
i
am Change the capitalization
I
also
free and work is also
quite
so that Correct your spelling
quiet
i
can easily get days off from my work .
Let me know which month is ok for you . See u soon
Change the capitalization
I
Your
lovingly
ToniReplace the word
You're
You are
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
