Some feel governments should invest in preserving minority languages, while others feel this is not a good use of resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days
people
are learning different
languages
for their reasons or goals.
In particular
, they want to know international
languages
such
as English or Dutch.
However
, some
languages
are dying out. Personally, I think it is not important to invest in minority
languages
. On the one hand, modern society tends to learn popular foreign
languages
for their goals
such
as to learn in prestigious universities or to find a job in a large company.
Therefore
these reasons they do not want to learn minor
languages
also
there are few native speakers who could teach their
languages
. I think it is not relevant to invest in these
languages
if there are not a lot of
people
willing to learn.
On the other hand
, other
people
believe
that is
necessary to save minor
languages
because if a language is dying out culture will die out too. They think that these
languages
are cultural heritage and due to saving minor
languages
people
could pass on their traditions and their history.
Also
,
this
part of humanity is afraid of the disappearance of national characteristics and differences. I consider
that is
not necessary to invest in
languages
that are dying out because few
people
would like to learn
also
I believe that the fusion of cultures will be anyway. In conclusion, governments must invent minor
languages
if they have national
necessary
Replace the word
necessity
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.
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