Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem.

Nowadays a considerable amount of

children

have unhealthy life way.

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system and parents have to make attempt to solve

this

problem. Childhood is the most important life period which we must try to enlarge some fruitful habits. There is no doubt that one of them is

healthy

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a healthy

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lifestyle. It seems that heir's lifestyle has been literally changed.

In particular

, parents because do not have enough time don't care about it.

Hence

,

children

and teenagers waste plenty of time for an unusual

job

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such

as

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playing digital games and sitting on

chair

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a chair

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.

Additionally

, they gain a lot of calories without

any

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practicing

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practising

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actively.

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on fact, over

this

decade

offspring

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have been wasting plenty of their own time on social networks and they have done less exercise than what they did over

past

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twenty years.

Moreover

, not only

children

have been becoming fattier but

also

some diseases related to overweight have expanded among them.

Furthermore

, in

past

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the past

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children

used to eat

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homemade

food

more than they do now.

Thus

, they gain

less

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celeries and more fruitful nutrients which cause them

were

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healthy. Another factor affecting

children

life style

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lifestyle

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is consuming junk

food

with trans- oil. Particularly,

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junk

food

is completely impact

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on hearth's performance. A great deal of importance is educating to use less high calories'

food

for

children

could reduce

consuming

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consumption

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of them especially if it does by teachers.

For example

, teaching over healthy

food

like fruit or

whole grain

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whole-grain

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bread and homemade

food

could encourage

children

to use them more. In conclusion, if these manners continued,

children

would become more unhealthy.

Hence

, teachers and parents have to help each other to tackle

this

problemcompletely

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problem completely

.