Some people feel that boarding school (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.
It is often said that children benefit from living in
dorm
, especially in today’s crowded world. Add an article
a dorm
the dorm
However
, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can also
be made against the idea. This
essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. On the one hand, opponents of dormitory
point to the freedom involved in areas Fix the agreement mistake
dormitories
such
as many rules, less privacy, dorm
politics. Correct word choice
and dorm
This
is almost same
as living with their parents and still thinking Correct article usage
the same
opinion
of those Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
due to
rumors
and gossip. Change the spelling
rumours
Secondly
, it appears that negotiating with someone you never know before is nightmare
for those who are grown age. Add an article
a nightmare
This
can make either one of them miserable on
their life during their study. Change preposition
in
Finally
, there is a concern over the peace of young people if there is party
close by. Correct article usage
a party
This
might make them embarrass
when they speak to others Wrong verb form
embarrassed
about
. Correct pronoun usage
about it
Being fighting
or arguing with anyone at their Unnecessary verb
Fighting
dorm
is a poor start to an academic career, after all. On the other hand
, supporters of dormitory
say that the skills learned outweigh the disadvantages, they highlight Fix the agreement mistake
dormitories
the
making friends through Correct your spelling
that
dorm
life might last
long
Rephrase
longer
among
their lives. Friendship may lead to career achievement, browsing hobbies and even taking care of someone. They Change preposition
in
also
say that living in student housing is less time as well. Students able
to save their time Add a missing verb
are able
than
Change preposition
apply
instead
for
using commute, Change preposition
of
thus
cancelling out the costs involved. Furthermore
, boarding school is cheaper than off-campus, whether you choose meal
plan or not. In conclusion, my own feeling is that a dormitory can indeed be a useful choice, with experience leading to improved skills that are invaluable in the future. Of course, Correct article usage
a meal
this
is provided that the year is planned carefully and used for something genuinely worthwhile.Submitted by alexstudyin on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion