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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. in your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request permission for 2 weeks time off from work from
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 Monday.I like to attend a
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program
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 course which is normally 5 months but on
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 special
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 it only takes two weeks to undergo the course in a much shorter period. because it is a compressed course we should be there all day.classes start from 8 a.m. and
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 till at 5 p.m.
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if I join
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 I am not able to be at work for two whole weeks. To remedy the situation,other members of our department accepted to cover my tasks during
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.
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,I will check all of their work after my classes every day to ensure that we won't face any problems in my tasks.
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,as you know,
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 directly affects my role for the company and it would be highly beneficial for companies future. I look forward to receiving your reply. Yours sincerely,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
  • Time off, absence, leave of absence
  • Personal circumstances, compelling reason
  • Duration, number of days/weeks
  • Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
  • Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
  • Preparation, advance work, assistance
  • Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
  • Inconvenience, minimal disruption
  • Request approval, formally request
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