You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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letter finds you in a good health .My name is Vivek and I have seen your advertisement in an Australian magazine. I am writing

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letter to request you to consider me for the

job

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which you have posted .In

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letter

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I will enumerate details about my skills and work

experience

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.Please allow me to elaborate on exactly why I would like

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course of action to be realized.

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, I would like to draw your attention

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my prior

experience

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which I have especially in

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field .I am carrying a ten plus

year

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experience

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in Child healthcare .I believe my passion

towards

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for

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the

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apply

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young ones

make

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me a suitable candidate for

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job

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explains clearly my likes towards your posted

job

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, I am

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person

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with trans quality ,equanimity and humility . I am a

person

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who is very fond of children. Adding to it I am a flexible

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,can work in

shift

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. I reckon

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skills and

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makes me

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candidate.

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, I

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want to share some details ,

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I leverage my free

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in Australia. In my free

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time

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I work in

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,where I handle 20 children at a

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.These all children are of different nature .I love to spend

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with them . I am assertive that u can empathize

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situation and consider me as

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person

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for your

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,as keeping my skills and

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in mind. Awaiting

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your kindest consideration. Regards, Vivek Vidhya

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

258 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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The Greeting

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what the problem is suggest solutions to the problem

Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opininon.

Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments’ responsibility. others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.