You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

this

letter finds you in a good health .My name is Vivek and I have seen your advertisement in an Australian magazine. I am writing

this

letter to request you to consider me for the

job

which you have posted .In

this

letter

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I will enumerate details about my skills and work

experience

.Please allow me to elaborate on exactly why I would like

this

course of action to be realized.

Firstly

, I would like to draw your attention

towards

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my prior

experience

which I have especially in

this

field .I am carrying a ten plus

year

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years

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experience

in Child healthcare .I believe my passion

towards

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for

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the

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apply

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young ones

make

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me a suitable candidate for

this

job

This

explains clearly my likes towards your posted

job

Secondly

, I am

person

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a person

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with trans quality ,equanimity and humility . I am a

person

who is very fond of children. Adding to it I am a flexible

person

,can work in

shift

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. I reckon

above mentioned

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skills and

experience

makes me

perfect

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candidate.

Lastly

, I

also

want to share some details ,

how

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I leverage my free

time

in Australia. In my free

time

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I work in

crutch

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the crutch

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,where I handle 20 children at a

time

.These all children are of different nature .I love to spend

time

with them . I am assertive that u can empathize

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with my

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situation and consider me as

suitable

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person

for your

job

,as keeping my skills and

experience

in mind. Awaiting

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your kindest consideration. Regards, Vivek Vidhya

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

10 paragraphs

258 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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The Greeting

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