You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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letter finds you in a good health .My name is Vivek and I have seen your advertisement in an Australian magazine. I am writing

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letter to request you to consider me for the

job

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which you have posted .In

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letter

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I will enumerate details about my skills and work

experience

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.Please allow me to elaborate on exactly why I would like

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course of action to be realized.

Firstly

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, I would like to draw your attention

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my prior

experience

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which I have especially in

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field .I am carrying a ten plus

year

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experience

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in Child healthcare .I believe my passion

towards

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the

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apply

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young ones

make

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me a suitable candidate for

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job

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explains clearly my likes towards your posted

job

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, I am

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person

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with trans quality ,equanimity and humility . I am a

person

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who is very fond of children. Adding to it I am a flexible

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,can work in

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. I reckon

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skills and

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makes me

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candidate.

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, I

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want to share some details ,

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I leverage my free

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in Australia. In my free

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time

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I work in

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,where I handle 20 children at a

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.These all children are of different nature .I love to spend

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with them . I am assertive that u can empathize

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with my

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situation and consider me as

suitable

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a suitable

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person

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for your

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,as keeping my skills and

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in mind. Awaiting

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your kindest consideration. Regards, Vivek Vidhya

mailtoritika.chandwani

Feb 8, 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

258 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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The Greeting

In some counntries, the cost of living is rapidly increasing. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What effects might this have on society?

In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important.

Obesity has been found to be a serious health hazard the world over, over the past few decades. What are the causes behind it and what are the effects of it on various sections of the community?

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is impossible for governments to help all the people in the world who need help, so governments should focus only on helping people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?