The charts below show the changes in ownership ofelectrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
line
graphs depict trends of
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appliances
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appliance
usage
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hours
spent on doing house
chores
among households
in a country between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, the first line
graph
shows that there was a steady increase of
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in
usage
of electrical appliances (washing machines, refrigerators and Correct article usage
the usage
vacuum
cleaners) among the households
and in
the Change preposition
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second
line
graph
, it represents that there was a decrease in hours
spent by these households
in
doing Change preposition
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house
chores
.
In the first line
graph
, there were only 40% and 30% households
using washing machines and Change preposition
of households
vacuum
cleaner
respectively, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
while
none used refrigerator
in 1920. Within 20 years, the Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
usage
of refrigerator
experienced Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
steep
increment by 90%, Correct article usage
a steep
while
both usage
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refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vacuum
cleaners remained steadily increase
. By 1980, Wrong verb form
increased
usage
of Correct article usage
the usage
refrigerator
reached its peak and became Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
plateau
, followed by Correct article usage
a plateau
usage
of Correct article usage
the usage
vacuum
cleaner
which reached its peak in 2000. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
However
, the percentage of usage
of washing machine
, apart from a slight dip in 1980, continued to be slightly unchanged from 1960 to 2019.
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machines
On the other hand
, second
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the second
line
graph
illustrates gradual
decrement Correct article usage
the gradual
of
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in
hours
spent on hour chores
by the households
. In 1920, a household spent 50 hours
per week to do
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chores
such
as washing clothes, preparing meals,
and cleaning. Remove the comma
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However
, the number of hours
spent dropped significantly by 30 hours
, to 20 hours
per week in 1960. From 1960 until 2019, the number of hours
spent remained slightly unchanged. The hours
spent on house
chores
in 2019 only dropped by 10 hours
, in comparison with 1960.Submitted by nur_fatina on
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