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Some parents say that they should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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It is often argued that in spare time children should take part in activities which are organized by their teachers and performed in groups,
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, some parents disagree and wish that they should perform independently. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss both aspects along with my personal reflection. On the one hand, some individuals think that minors are not mature enough to arrange tasks on their own, and they should invariably participate in activities which are arranged by their teachers, parents or seniors, for they are more mature and can decide better exercise for students.
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, in schools when students get leisure time so faculty arrange and give them many tasks,
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 enjoyment they learn many good things,
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 as rules for playing a game, not to misbehave with any colleges during the game etc.
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, some people believe that minors should decide what and how to play on their own because in future they have to plan many things for themselves so it is good to have practice from now
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 they will not be able to take any decision independently.
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, doing any task independently boost their confidence level.
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, some children are always spoon-fed for every simple and easy thing owing to, which they are very dull. After having discussed the pertinent points it can be inferred that
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 some parents assume that children should take part in actions which are supervised by their teachers while some believe they should do on their own. In my opinion, minor students should always participate in movements arranged by their elders because they do not know the difference between good and bad.
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