Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and songs are

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of their

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for secondary school learners. To a major

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the viewpoint. My preference is explained

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. The principal argument

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shall put forth is that senior school students have other subjects to

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as science and technology.nowadays

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of pupils need more focus on applied science rather than

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and poems.it is because everything has done through computer and machinery so that they would

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more eyes on

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topics. To add to the mentioned point at the age of 15 years when they are in high school their minds run behind technology and quickly excepted on various things relating to automation along with robotics.

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they can't even think about

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and

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for them it is waste of

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or distraction in

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study.

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it should not be overlooked that reading

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and poems is totally waste of

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for those who are interested in literature

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is more crucial than other aspects for them.they can bring knowledge and skills from books and poems to read different stories as well as singing talent

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it is not wasted effort for their own point of view. To close the discussion it can be eventually commented that literature is a vain attempt for

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student

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instead

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of learning

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a technological

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subject

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it is not worth of

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for fascinated people. I believe that

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type of topic

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not for

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scholar but for Juvenile in every

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