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Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family through mostly social network sites, rather than other ways of communication like talking on the phone or face to face. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give some reason for your answer.

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It is irrefutable that social networking has revolutionized communication modes in recent years.
However
, youngsters prefer to communicate with peer groups and relatives by using social networking apps as compared to communicating directly or on phone calls. I think it is a negative development.
To begin
 with, why it is a negative development because younger generations use technology to connect with more and more people online and make
friends
 but somehow they are forgetting the relations which are more precious in their lives.
This
 means the number of
friends
 is more than real
ones
. Nowadays, children do not find it interesting to spend time with family members.
For instance
 ,a person will have 1000
friends
 on Instagram, though no best friend with whom he can share his happiness and sorrows.
Therefore
, there are many disadvantages of using social networking sites despite many benefits.
Furthermore
, with the increased usage of social networking sites, younger
ones
 are adopting the modern culture and getting away from their original culture.
in other words
, younger
ones
 do not spend time with their grandparents.
In addition
 to
this
, there is much cybercrime which is more frequent these days. Take ,
for example
, husbands are cheating on their wives as they are more interested in online
friends
.
Thus
, relationships are getting affected.
As a result
, our near and dear
ones
 are going away from us. To conclude
this
, it is evident that there are many benefits of communication over social networking, though some drawbacks too as youngsters are indulging themselves in show-off friendships rather than quality relationships.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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