You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I cannot attend an evening course for a couple of weeks. Currently, I remove to another accommodation, which is situated in the South part of our city. As you know

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is too far away from courses and after work, I will have to go strictly to home. So that I cannot continue my participation.

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accommodation belongs to my granny. She lives there

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10 years, but, currently, she has gone to a vocation in the USA and wondering I to take care of her cat. I could not refuse her request. We are very close to each other. Hopefully,

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situation is temporary and when she will came back, I can resume attending the course. For

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reason, I was wondering, if you could help me and freeze my membership card for 14 days? I do not want to lose my membership.

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, I have paid some money in advance, and I do not want to reject

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payment. I am looking forward to hearing from you, Yours sincerely, Bim Bom

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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185 words

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