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In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave during the first month after the birth of the newborn. Do you think the advantages of maternity leave outweigh the disadvantages ?

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In different
nations
Use synonyms
,
norms
Use synonyms
 have been laid down that
grant
Use synonyms
permission
Use synonyms
 to the
females
Use synonyms
 for taking a
break
Use synonyms
 for around a
month
Use synonyms
 after giving
life
Use synonyms
 to a newborn. In different
nations
Use synonyms
,
norms
Use synonyms
 have been laid down that
grant
Use synonyms
permission
Use synonyms
 to the
females
Use synonyms
 for taking a
break
Use synonyms
 for around a
month
Use synonyms
 after giving
life
Use synonyms
 to a newborn. In different
nations
Use synonyms
,
norms
Use synonyms
 have been laid down that
grant
Use synonyms
permission
Use synonyms
 to the
females
Use synonyms
 for taking a
break
Use synonyms
 for around a
month
Use synonyms
 after giving
life
Use synonyms
 to a newborn. In different
nations
Use synonyms
,
norms
Use synonyms
 have been laid down that
grant
Use synonyms
permission
Use synonyms
 to the
females
Use synonyms
 for taking a
break
Use synonyms
 for around a
month
Use synonyms
 after giving
life
Use synonyms
 to a newborn.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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