The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.
The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried
people
in the US,
and the effect of Remove the comma
apply
children
on the overall
ratings of married couples
. According to
the first chart
it shows how married Add a comma
chart,
people
are happier than unmarried people
, regardless of their age
. In the first chart
we can see that the happiest Add a comma
chart,
age
group in which they are married are people
aged between 18 and 29 years, but there is very little difference across the different age
groups. People
who aren’t married are generally less happier
than married Change the word
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couples
, but for
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people
aged 65 and over are happier than the other age
groups but are still lower than married couples
. Among married people
, despite having children
or not their rate of happiness is still quite constant. The trend is that married couples
who have children
under the age
of 18 are shown to be a bit happier than people
without children
or who have children
over the age
of 18. Overall
, the charts clearly illustrate that married couples
are far happier than unmarried people
and this
is regardless of the age
group or whether they have children
or not, it is a constant trend.Submitted by z.pfister on
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