You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in the part-time job advertisement that you have posted in the Sunday Observer newspaper

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Sunday. I am Susitha Bandara, a university student, studying Engineering at Ottawa University. Since my major subject is Computer, I am keen on working in your Computer shop on a part-time basis since it will be beneficial for my studies as well. I have prior experience in troubleshooting Computers and Laptops both Hardware and Software. Because I have my lectures from 8:30 AM to 1:00 PM everyday and I am staying in the same neighborhood which your shop is located, it is extremely convenient for me to be there in weekdays.

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, in the weekends I do not have lectures I can work in the morning session. I would be grateful if you can offer me

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chance since it helps me a lot for my studies as well. I look forward to hearing from you. Your sincerely, Susitha Bandara

susithapbWed Feb 09 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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6 paragraphs

166 words

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