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the graphs below show the percentage of households with internet and broadband access in Australia, together with frequency of internet access, between 2006-07 and 2012-13. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

the graphs below show the percentage of households with internet and broadband access in Australia, together with frequency of internet access, between 2006-07 and 2012-13. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
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The graph provided information about the percentage and the frequency of
internet
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access
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 in Australian households between 2006-07 and 2012-13. As the same
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the development of
internet
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access
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 in households, the frequency of daily
internet
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access
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 grew dramatically, from 60% to 80% in
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 period.
In contrast
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, the proportion of those accessing the
internet
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 at least once a week declined steadily.
However
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, there was stability in the monthly
internet
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access
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 group in the given period
Overall
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, there was an upward trend in broadband and non-broadband
access
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 between 2006-07 and 2012-13. The trend for
internet
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access
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 every day significantly increase,
while
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 there was a downward trend in the group of at least weekly
internet
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access
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 and unchanged in those of monthly
internet
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access
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, access with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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