the graphs below show the percentage of households with internet and broadband access in Australia, together with frequency of internet access, between 2006-07 and 2012-13. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

the graphs below show the percentage of households with internet and broadband access in Australia, together with frequency of internet access, between 2006-07 and 2012-13.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
The graph provided information about the percentage and the frequency of
internet
access
in Australian households between 2006-07 and 2012-13. As the same
as
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the development of
internet
access
in households, the frequency of daily
internet
access
grew dramatically, from 60% to 80% in
this
period.
In contrast
, the proportion of those accessing the
internet
at least once a week declined steadily.
However
, there was stability in the monthly
internet
access
group in the given period
Overall
, there was an upward trend in broadband and non-broadband
access
between 2006-07 and 2012-13. The trend for
internet
access
every day significantly increase,
while
there was a downward trend in the group of at least weekly
internet
access
and unchanged in those of monthly
internet
access
.
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