in the future nobody will why printed newspaper and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.to what extent do you agree or disagree?
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concrete
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in their daily life. Furthermore
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, global warming and other pollutions
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and employment as well while online material Correct your spelling
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a newspaper
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read
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the environment
time
and money
.
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the internet
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communities
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time
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