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Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think that university education should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Now many people have their own views about the lessons in universities, some people think
students
 should learn more about the
skills
 of employment for future. Others think they should
focus
 on academic
study
, I agree with d academic
study
 and I do not think
college
students
 should learn
the
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employment
skills
 in universities. In my opinion, I
am agree
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agree
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 with the people who think that
university
 education should
focus
 on academic
study
 only. Because I think
university
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universities
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 as the institutions of higher education,
they
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apply
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should teach
students
 more frontier knowledge to ensure that the
university
at
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is at
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 a high academic level and develop more cutting-edge technologies. At the same
time
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 many
college
students
 choose to apply for a master’s degree。And I
am disagree
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 with the view that
University
 education should
focus
 on
skills
 of equipment for the future. Now many
students
 may not find a job Which is related to their
college
 major, so it is difficult for universities to decide what employment
skills
 they ought to teach
students
.
In addition
, now
much
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many
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 companies have their own induction training and some companies events send
an
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apply
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old stuff as your teacher to teach you. So I do not think
college
students
 need to learn these
skills
 in
university
. As I see,
students
 do not need to
study
skills
 in
college
, they just have to
focus
 on academic
study
 only
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