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CHILDREN LEARN MORE BY OBSERVING THE BEHAVIOUR OF ADULTS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? GIVE YOUR OPINION WITH RELEVANT EXAMPLES

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Children
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’s mind is impressionable. They pick up
things
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 very quickly, be it learning a new language, singing, dancing or a new habit. In my opinion,
children
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 observe their
parents
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 and elders and subconsciously copy their habits. In
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 essay, I will substantiate my view.
Children
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 often find it difficult to follow what they have been instructed to do.
Parents
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 tell kids what should be done or should not be done. It is for their
benefits
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, but they don’t quite get it.
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hand
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 they copy their elder brother or sister instinctively.
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, in
childhood
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my childhood
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 days, my younger brother always used to copy me. If I used to play
video
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a video
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game
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, he
also
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 wanted to do the same. If I read comics, he
also
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 demanded the same. It is evident that
children
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 are keen observers and they tend to pick up
things
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 faster by copying than by following instructions. They
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 learn bad habits from
elders
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their elders
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. When they are young, they do not know what is good or bad. Once they grow up,
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 they realize these.
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,
children
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 see their cousins and siblings insisting
for
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 toys and
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 getting
it
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them
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 from
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parents
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their parents
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. They start believing that it is good to be adamant to get what you want. They are unable to understand how
parents
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 have to sacrifice other
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 to
fulfill
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 their
wish
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. I believe it is the responsibility of
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 to explain
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things
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 to
children
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. It will ensure that
children
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 develop only good habits.
On the contrary
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, some people believe that every child has a unique talent. According to them
children
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 learns as per their interest and abilities and not
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 surroundings.
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, I believe that a child is like clay and get moulded by their surroundings.
right
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the right
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 environment is much more important to harness its talent. To sum up,
children
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 follow what they see rather than what they are told to do. It is the responsibility of
parents
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 and elders to lead them in the right direction by setting examples. Rather than by rule book, it is better to lead them by example.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Imitation
  • Observational learning
  • Role model
  • Social learning theory
  • Behavioral influence
  • Skill acquisition
  • Cognition
  • Socialization
  • Critical thinking
  • Direct instruction
  • Cultural transmission
  • Media influence
  • Norms and values
  • Cognitive development
  • Guidance
  • Active participation
  • Behavioural patterns
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