CHILDREN LEARN MORE BY OBSERVING THE BEHAVIOUR OF ADULTS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? GIVE YOUR OPINION WITH RELEVANT EXAMPLES

Children
’s mind is impressionable. They pick up
things
very quickly, be it learning a new language, singing, dancing or a new habit. In my opinion,
children
observe their
parents
and elders and subconsciously copy their habits. In
this
essay, I will substantiate my view.
Children
often find it difficult to follow what they have been instructed to do.
Parents
tell kids what should be done or should not be done. It is for their
benefits
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, but they don’t quite get it.
On the other
hand
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they copy their elder brother or sister instinctively.
For example
, in
childhood
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days, my younger brother always used to copy me. If I used to play
video
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a video
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game
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, he
also
wanted to do the same. If I read comics, he
also
demanded the same. It is evident that
children
are keen observers and they tend to pick up
things
faster by copying than by following instructions. They
also
learn bad habits from
elders
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. When they are young, they do not know what is good or bad. Once they grow up,
then
they realize these.
For example
,
children
see their cousins and siblings insisting
for
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toys and
then
getting
it
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them
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from
parents
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their parents
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. They start believing that it is good to be adamant to get what you want. They are unable to understand how
parents
have to sacrifice other
things
to
fulfill
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their
wish
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. I believe it is the responsibility of
parents
to explain
such
things
to
children
. It will ensure that
children
develop only good habits.
On the contrary
, some people believe that every child has a unique talent. According to them
children
learns as per their interest and abilities and not
by
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surroundings.
However
, I believe that a child is like clay and get moulded by their surroundings.
right
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environment is much more important to harness its talent. To sum up,
children
follow what they see rather than what they are told to do. It is the responsibility of
parents
and elders to lead them in the right direction by setting examples. Rather than by rule book, it is better to lead them by example.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Imitation
  • Observational learning
  • Role model
  • Social learning theory
  • Behavioral influence
  • Skill acquisition
  • Cognition
  • Socialization
  • Critical thinking
  • Direct instruction
  • Cultural transmission
  • Media influence
  • Norms and values
  • Cognitive development
  • Guidance
  • Active participation
  • Behavioural patterns
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