You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months -say how you work could be done while you are away -ask for his-her help in arranging it

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Dear David, I am writing to let you know that I want to

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in our company's head

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Japan

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for six months. Let me explain why I want to

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Japan

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for six months.

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, because I know how to speak their language, which could be very beneficial to me since I have the required communication skills.

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, my brother lives in

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. He has been there for 3 years so far and it will be a good chance to meet him and his family as well.

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, being in

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could scale up my experience and knowledge which could positively impact our

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here in Cairo. As for my

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here in Cairo's

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, I will do it online and send it over via e-mail, so my

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will not be interrupted with my absence. If you accept that, I would like to ask you kindly to arrange for my flight and for my travel allowance as well. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Best regards, Jay

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

175 words

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