The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Undoubtedly, along with the development of science and technology, more and more
countries
have
been relied
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on nuclear
power
. In
this
regard, some people believe that nuclear
energy
are
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much more eco-friendly in comparison to other types of
energy
. From my standpoint,
although
the benefits of nuclear
power
are undeniable, it could be considered
as
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a serious threat to the whole world. From
environmental
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point of view, nuclear
power
comes from chemical reactions which
requires
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wide
ranges
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of experiments by expert scientists,
otherwise
, undesirable consequences could occur.
Hence
, it is essential that government implement some policies in place to protect humankind.
Additionally
, the waste of the reactions mostly is dropped to lakes or forests which are the natural habitat of animals. It is clear that
this
action can lead to decreasing the population of wildlife and increasing the
endangered
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animals.
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, the number of one species of fish, which
were
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source
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of income in the south of Iran, has extremely dropped off after constructing the nuclear laboratory near the sea. From
political
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point of view, some
countries
, especially developed nations, use nuclear
energy
as a weapon to control developing
countries
.
This
authority can result in disparity among
countries
which could be
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main reason
of
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external wars.
Furthermore
, in order to protect nuclear
centers
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from unexpected events, governments allocate a huge amount of money to protect these areas.
However
,
this
money could be better spent on developing
the
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solar
energy
which is
environmentally-friendly
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. To put it in a nutshell, with respect to the whole views mentioned above, it is not acceptable to use nuclear
power
since it could be
a
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dangerous
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for
the
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nature and
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human beings
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human-beings
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human beings
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.
Therefore
, alternative
energy
sources should be developed to replace
the
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nuclear
power
.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
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