The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Undoubtedly, along with the development of science and technology, more and more

countries

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have

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on nuclear

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. In

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regard, some people believe that nuclear

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are

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much more eco-friendly in comparison to other types of

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. From my standpoint,

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the benefits of nuclear

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are undeniable, it could be considered

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a serious threat to the whole world. From

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point of view, nuclear

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comes from chemical reactions which

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wide

ranges

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of experiments by expert scientists,

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, undesirable consequences could occur.

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, it is essential that government implement some policies in place to protect humankind.

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, the waste of the reactions mostly is dropped to lakes or forests which are the natural habitat of animals. It is clear that

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action can lead to decreasing the population of wildlife and increasing the

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animals.

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, the number of one species of fish, which

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source

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of income in the south of Iran, has extremely dropped off after constructing the nuclear laboratory near the sea. From

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a political

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point of view, some

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, especially developed nations, use nuclear

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as a weapon to control developing

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.

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authority can result in disparity among

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which could be

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main reason

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external wars.

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, in order to protect nuclear

centers

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from unexpected events, governments allocate a huge amount of money to protect these areas.

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,

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money could be better spent on developing

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solar

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which is

environmentally-friendly

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. To put it in a nutshell, with respect to the whole views mentioned above, it is not acceptable to use nuclear

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since it could be

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dangerous

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for

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nature and

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human beings

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human-beings

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human beings

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.

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, alternative

energy

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sources should be developed to replace

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nuclear

power

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.