Animal are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

The
onle
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only
way that humans are different from other creatures is because of our brains. The rest are identical.
For example
, a monkey and a man
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a lot of similarities, and the only separation is that we can talk and reason out while
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they
that
cannot. But even though we are far more rational than them, their lives
also
matter. Due to the technological advancements nowadays, we no longer consider the consequences of our actions because we are far more concerned
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our own selfish interests rather than those of others, specifically the non-human living creatures we are talking about in
this
article. Modernization comes with innovations and renovations .
For example
, cutting down trees and reclaiming
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forests
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infrastructures which creates a lot of
bussiness
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business
opportunities for some people only. But is it really all worth it? other species are now in danger of being lost forever because of our carelessness. Progress is good but
nevertheless
, we should always weigh things and think of the pros and cons of our actions. We are all creations of God and each of us
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made to carry out a specific purpose in
life
.
Furthermore
, all
life
forms are interconnected whether we like it or not
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because
we were programmed to harmoniously co-exist through biodiversity.
In addition
, we should not only protect those animals which we think are beneficial to us because I believe that all of us were brought into
this
world to play a role in making
life
sustainable here on earth.
For example
, we see snakes posing a threat to us because of their deadly venoms and
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aggressive
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that could result
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death, but snakes eat rats and rodents which we consider as pests due to the damages they cause to our farmers' crops. These plant products are what we mostly consume as food
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our plates. We may presume that only domesticated animals are beneficial for us
such
as cows,
cattles
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cattle
castles
,pigs,chickens and even dogs. But what we do not know is that they too benefit from the harmonious
enivronment
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environment
we are all in.
furthermore
, If we take away the equilibrium of nature, it will trigger a chain reaction and the effects of
this
may not be visibly instant but will reveal itself gradually. In conclusion, all of us should look after one another because we were all formed by our creator to act as stewards for all of his
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. Being the superior
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species
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, it is our obligation to preserve the existence of other
life
forms, for our younger generations to see their beauty while they are still here on earth.
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