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The two maps describe the
Islip
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 city
centre
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, in its present form and in its proposed expansion. Overall, it is clear that the plan is to extend the
centre
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 and its bus station, car
park
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 and mall will be added. At present,
Islip
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 town
centre
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 consists of only the shops, main
road
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 and housings. To the east of the
centre
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, there is a
park
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 is located, while to the south, there are housing and school are situated. According to the proposal of the
Islip
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 town
centre
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, only the shops, housing and school will remain from the original site. The most significant development will be the reduction of the
park
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 in the southeast direction. Shops and the main
road
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 will be demolished to make way for the bus station, shopping
centre
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, car
park
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 and new housing. The main
road
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 will be converted to a pedestrian
road
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 and the new ring
road
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 will be constructed around the town . New housing will be built for the
Islip
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's residents and
this
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 whole city
centre
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 plan will be surrounded by the dual carriageway.

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