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In many countries today, many highly qualified graduates struggle to find employment. What factors may have caused this situation? What can be done about it?

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Media
 content produced by TV
station
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 is playing a key role in educating the general public. A number of societies claim that the programs from
eletronic
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electronic
media
such
 as
television
 must contribute to
improve
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 audiences knowledge, especially related to social problems. I personally agree that it is a big responsibility carried out by
television
 management to present more comprehensive and reliable
contents
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content
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 for their viewers.
To begin
 with, the
media
 researchers
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concern
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 that a plethora of information disseminated through all
media
 channels are important because it has
capability
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 to influence public opinion.
For instance
, when various
entertaintment
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entertainment
 programs
in
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television
 publish certain
issue
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issues
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such
 as disaster
event
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 in a particular destination, the channels should deliver trustworthy details as
it
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they
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 will be absorbed by all individuals watching the show. All talents
also
 need to encourage their followers to be more sensitive
with
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to
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 the current situation and probably initiate social
movement
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movements
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 like
open
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an open
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 donation. Another point to consider is
financial
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 benefit obtained by the
media
 while they are providing positive contents.
This
 is because
media
 aired
improtant
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important
issue
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 positively is tend to maintain their image in front of both sponsors and consumers.
For example
, if
television
 stations run social projects and broadcast
it
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them
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 through their
media
 channel, they have
possibility
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the possibility
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 to attract more people to watch
it
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them
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.
As a result
, a multitude of brands
willing
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 to spend their money on the shows as it generates high
viewers
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viewer
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enggagement
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engagement
 and brands might promote their products effectively during the sponsorship program. In conclusion, I absolutely agree that all
entertaintment
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entertainment
 shows with
high
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a high
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 level of popularity need to bring forth educational
contents
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content
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 and contribute to
enhance
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enhancing
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 viewers' knowledge and understanding, especially in terms of social issues
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