The given pie charts illustrate the poplarity of going to worl between cycling and driving

The given pie charts illustrate the poplarity of going to worl between  cycling and driving
The given pie charts illustrate the popularity of going to work between cycling and driving
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, it can be seen from the chants that the percentage of health and fitness is equal to less pollution, which
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80t There
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majority part of driving and cycling in comfort and distance to work,
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health and fitness d less pollution
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cycling, which both of them are at approximately co
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form all.
On the other hand
, there
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minority
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a minority
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of cycling and driving in
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than
drivning
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driving
, no
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costs
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pushing
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problems and safer than cycling, need to cany
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things
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, faster than cycling respectively.
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they have o lot of different points in number,
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than
faster
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there driving
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.
Finally
, these two
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have a very similar pattern. Just differ in
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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