Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child’s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the

last

two or three decades, offspring have been improved tremendously than ever before and they have been putting numerous

intrest

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interest

in a lot of

things

. .

However

, some think that

mothers

and

fathers

are played the most crucial part in a toddler's improvement while others believe that there are other

things

that have the most

importance

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influence,

such

as television or friends.

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, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand,

parents

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the main aspect for children's breakthrough every situation, they cannot teach any qualities to their little ones, but they like to copy to their elders which is what they behave and how to talk

as a result

, children can be learnt many good

things

from their

parents

.

For example

, in the south Asian nations,

mothers

and

fathers

always consider

about

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their

offsprings

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which is how they learn for getting

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good employment in future and extracurricular activity,

hence

, offspring can be improved by their

parents

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attention and care.

In addition

,

mothers

and

fathers

can have an innumerable lifetime experience, they can guide

to

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their toddlers

with

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a proper way like

breakthroughss

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breakthroughs

breakthrough

.

Therefore

,

parents

give more

elemenst

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elements

element

of offspring's development.

On the other hand

, there are some aspects that play the main crucial influence

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a child's improvement. Television is the most significant element of a child's breakthrough which is they can teach the world's knowledge not only

this

but

also

the wisdom too.

For instance

, numerous TV company has started only for kids,

hence

, they can be learnt from it many

things

even academic knowledge too. To be more precise, infants are learnt many good

things

from watching shows,

hence

, in

this

pandemic situation, India has started to telecast school subjects by channels.

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,

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of

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can be influenced. To conclude, infants' development is of utmost importance in every nation.

Parents

can play the main part

of

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their little one's breakthrough like guiding, teaching and encouraging; television can give enormous wisdom about education and the world's knowledge too.

However

, in my opinion, about

this

,

mothers

and

fathers

have the most crucial role in offspring's improvement and I hope

this

process is conducive to building a developed society.