Your telephone company made a mistake about sending your bill to a wrong address. Write a letter to the account manager to complain and explain what problems this caused and what you would like them to do

Dear sir,  My name is Zannatul Firdaus, I live
at
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khilgaon
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Khilgaon
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in Dhaka. I am a service holder. Today I am writing
this
letter to inform you that, your company made a mistake about sending my
bill
to the wrong address. To
embark
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with, every month, I receive my telephone
bill
in the first week, but in the
last
month, I did not receive my
bill
. After about 10 days, a person from the neighbouring block gave me the
bill
saying that it had been delivered to his address. 
In addition
, after getting my
bill
copy when I went to pay the
bill
and
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it
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was charged BDT. 500
as
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fine for being late. I argued a lot but they did not listen and I had to pay the fine. 
Moreover
, I request you to refund the amount that I had to pay as a fine or adjust it in the next
bill
because it was not my fault that I was late. If you need any more information from me regarding
this
matter, please feel free to contact me at my email address.  Hoping for a positive response from
your
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regarding
this
matter. With regards, Zannatul
Submitted by Zannatul Irin on

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Coherence and Cohesion
Address the account manager by name if possible for a more personalized approach.
Task Achievement
The letter should clearly address the problems caused by the billing error and the desired outcome, as well as follow a more logical sequence of events.
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