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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram shows the current and proposed architectural layout of Southwest Airport. Overall, after redevelopment, the airport will be expanded in size and equipped with new facilities and services. After renovations in the departure
hallway
, the café will be replaced by
check-in
Correct article usage
the check-in
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area
, while the current check-in
area
 will be turned into a bag drop section. The café will be rebuilt in the southwest corner of
this
hallway
. Interestingly, the passport control, security and customs areas will remain intact,
however
, the shops will be constructed beside the concourse, in the north of the security and passport control
area
;
this
 place is currently vacant.
Furthermore
, the arrival
hallway
, which is currently empty, will have several new amenities namely an additional cafe in the corner near to the customs department, an ATM just beside the café, and a car hire
area
 which will be added in the southeast corner by slightly expanding the
hallway
 to the right. The most predominant change will occur in the concourse; it will be expanded to build 18 gates in total for the inflow and outflow of passengers. Currently, the concourse has just 8 gates.
Consequently
, the walkways, which are currently present will be replaced by the sky train.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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