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The map describes the main changes which have taken place in
the
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Arnold avenue of Grange
park
 between the year 1920 and today. Overall, it is clear that the
park
 has been modernized with new extra amusement amenities and more features. In 1920, the middle of the Grange
park
 had consisted
the
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 fountain, but today
this
 has been
domolished
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demolished
 by the rose garden which is
surrounted
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surrounded
 by the seats. To the northeast of the garden had
pond
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a pond
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 for water plants which was
elimminated
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eliminated
 to make way for the children's play area and
next
 to the sitting bench was demolished. To the southeast, in 1920 had
glasshouse
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a glasshouse
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 which has been changed the water features. Surprisingly, both entrance has not been changed and
still
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 now used, but a new underground entrance has been built for
car
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the car
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park
.
Moreover
, to the south of the
park
 had sitting
seat
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seats
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 as well as rose
garden
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gardens
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 were eliminated in today's
park
. To the west, a stage for musicians has been changed by the amphitheatre for concerts.
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