In most countries, prison is the most common solution when people commit a crime. However, if they were to receive better education, it could prevent them from becoming criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many parts of

world

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sending

criminals

behind the bars is suggested to avoid

crime

than giving

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proper

education

.While

,

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imprisonment is

best

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way

to stop

crime

,if they receive good

education

it's

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also

be helpful. On the one hand,giving

a

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punishment to offenders is

best

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way

to reduce

crime

.

Firstly

, it gives satisfaction to the victims of that

crime

. To explain it,

as

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if

criminal

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a criminal

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commits a big

crime

and

not

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given a proper hard punishment

than

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this

is not fair for the victim as

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the criminal

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criminal

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criminals

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move

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freely .

Secondly

,it sets

example

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an example

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for others in future if they commit

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a crime

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crime

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.To put it simply, as there

proper

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imprisonment for every

crime

than

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criminal

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criminals

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can think before doing a

crime

that they have to face these hurdles if they do so.

On the other hand

, making

criminal

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literate is

also

a possible

way

to stop

crime

.

However

, many

criminals

are illiterate they

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have any means of income and no knowledge it will force them to become

criminal

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.

In other words

,by taking

education

they can do a reasonable job for bread and butter of their family and gain

a

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good social respect.

Moreover

, in prison

person

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people

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meet other bad companies which

effect

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them badly so giving them a proper

education

is a good

way

to change them.

For example

, now there is a prison in

Netherlands

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where how many books

criminals

can read that

much

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years their imprisonment will Reduce. To conclude,

Although

,bars for

criminals

set

example

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for others and give proper justice to victims,giving a good

education

cannot be ignored as it avoids

criminal

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from other bad habits in future as well as it gives them a good social image.