Both governments and individuals are spending vast amounts of money protecting animals and their habitat. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays one of the most discussed topics is the safeguard of endangered species and their habitat. Even tho there are a lot of other issues in our community many may argue that we should focus more on other things like

poverty

and better healthcare. In my opinion, I think they are both important issues, but we focus more on the

animals

and their preservation due to the

fact

that the

media

talk about it more, in

fact

, there are many

organisations

that occupy those topics but they are not that popular.

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in our

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are one of the biggest tools to spread information and to change

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focus on things. In

fact

, It is more common to see articles and programs that talk about

animals

than

poverty

and other social issues,

this

is probably because, sadly,

people

sympathise more about

animals

than other human beings. Our world is becoming more and more selfish as the

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pass. Despite it being uncommon to see

media

talking about

organisations

that act for

society

, it doesn't mean there are not any out there. Personally, when

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founded an enormous amount of

organisations

that work for

society

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people

that I've never heard before,

this

is probably because they do not have enough money to advertise what they do. Overall,

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think the

media

's attention is more focused on the environmental problems because

people

tend to care more about

animals

than other human beings who are struggling in

poverty

. In my ,opinion

this

happens because our

society

sees

people

who struggle in

poverty

as something to eliminate from it and we all care more about ourselves than others. In ,conclusion

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totally agree with the

fact

that we should invest the same amount of money and effort in those

organisations

that care about

people

,

nonetheless

, it's very important to safeguard the

animals

and their habitat because the world is the home of all of us.