Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.

Today the young generation follows famous

people

but nowadays, some entertainers are famous for their lifestyle rather than their

talent

. I partially agree with that. I believe that

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not all celebrities are famed for their wealth, some are noted

also

because of their

talent

.

Firstly

,

Many

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people

become a star because of their natural

talent

. In

bollywood

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, Pankaj Tripathy and Rajkumar Rao are

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example

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of

this

. Both are

big

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name

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just because of their natural acting skill. These actors

are stay

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away from glamour so young

people

should learn so

much

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things from their

hardwork

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hard work

. Some youngsters may choose Sachin Tendulkar as a Role Model.He is become a God of Cricket just because of his determination towards cricket.

Secondly

, some celebrities are famous for their lifestyle and wealth rather than

talent

. A very good example of

this

is Rakhi Sawant. She has less

talent

but

more

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famous

beecuase

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because

of her boldness and glamourous

avtaar

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avatar

. Today youngsters

also

follows

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starkids

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star kids

just because of their luxurious behaviour, which is not a good thing.

For example

, Aryan

khan

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and Suhana are followed by many

people

just because they are celebrity kids. In conclusion, I just say that teenagers have a choice to choose a role model.Entertainers are getting famed for two reasons.

First

for their

talent

and

second

for their

galmour

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glamour

and luxurious lifestyle. So young

people

should

be think

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about that, which kind of celebrity can be ideal or

rolemodel

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role model

for us.