One of your colleagues was in charge of organizing an annual executive conference, and he/she has been successful in doing it. You want to congratulate your colleague on that. Write a letter to this colleague. In your letter, • congratulate your colleague for successfully organizing the event • mention what you liked about it the most • say how much you would like him/her to organize other events as well

Dear David, I am writing to congratulate you

for

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your successful organization of the annual executive conference.

Although

the conference was crowded

this

year, you did it perfectly

good

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well

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. Let me describe what I liked about your organization.

Firstly

, the main entrance was amazing, I loved it.

Secondly

, the tables were well-organized and were clean, tidy, and neat.

Thirdly

, the food was delicious and tasty.

Finally

, the wall drawings which are I like the most

,

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were stunning so much that I could not

took

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my eyes away from them. Our company is planning to conduct a conference

next

month in

Atlanta

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area. So I would like to kindly ask you to organize it for us if you have time. If you need more information, please text me on my private number. I hope you will consider organizing it favourably. Waiting for your reply. Best regards, Jay Daniel