Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often an argued issue

work

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is given numerous happiness and

satisfactions

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to the population. Some believe that mankind is being happy with satisfying career life who are kept jobs for a long period to compared people who changed their

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often. I partially agree with

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statement and the already stated essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. Jobs are given enormous happiness as well as

satisfaction

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a satisfaction

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to the population who

are hold

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a permanent

emplyment

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employment

because aforementioned kind of situation can be

fullfilled

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fulfilled

by their families commitments which are needs and wants, So, they can be happy with a regular salary,

work

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, working place and fellow worker.

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, mankind can get promotion and PF from permanent works.

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, Indians never changed their life very frequently because they used to practice for

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caring

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family responsibilities with money,

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, they can live a happy lifestyle.

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, holding an

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can provide

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plenty of joyness.

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, frequently changing persons too can be lived a pleasure lifestyle because job satisfaction is the most crucial than anything, if a person does feel his

work

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gives more pressures, he must be changed a new

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, insight of he might be continued, so, previously mentioned can lead to suicides.

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, humankind needs

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pleasure in their career,

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, they like to change works frequently,

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, they can enjoy their new

work

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environment, fellow worker, management and job.

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, in Western nation's mankind usually changes their employment due to job satisfaction, but they can live a happy life. So, these kinds of people

also

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are being happy. To conclude, When all things considered, I am convinced that both occupations switches or

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may bring pleasure to workers. I hope the thing indicated process is conducive to building a happy society.

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