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Many people argue that humanity must radically alter its ways of living in order to prevent more climate change. To what extent do you agree?

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The issue of
climate
change
 is getting more notable and urgent in many places around the world. For recent years, human beings have been seeking types of recycling
energy
 including solar
power
, wind
power
, even
power
 extracted from corn. These types of recycling
energy
 can not only generate as equal electricity as traditional
power
 like coal but can
also
 be more friendly to our environment. Apparently, it is vital for humanity to alter ways of living in order to prevent
climate
change
.
Climate
change
 is harmful to mother
earth
 and causes terrible disasters to humans. The heat of the
earth
 keeps climbing up, which will raise the level of the sea and overwhelm some countries.
Such
 a hot temperature will
also
 result in forest fires making a lot of species abandon their habitat. Human’s houses may be intruded
by
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 wild animals because these wild animals without homes have to search for a temporary shelter. The problem of hot temperature results from using coal to generate electricity and
deforestate
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deforestation
deforested
 too many trees.
As a result
, humans have a responsibility to prevent
climate
change
 for
the
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life on the
earth
. Many people argue that the more recycling
energy
 we utilize, the lower the temperature of the
earth
 will obtain.
Although
 it is hard for a few nations to convert coal
power
 to solar
power
 or wind
power
 now because of the development of the economy. If we are willing to use recycling
power
 rather than disposable
energy
,
climate
change
 will be gradually resolved.
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