Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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play a vital role in modern society. Recently, there have been many Use synonyms
celebrities
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celebrities
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people
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celebrities
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glamor
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glamour
people
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glamour
celebrities
have, the more likely young Use synonyms
people
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celebrities
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people
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celebrities
are so wealthy that they are able to purchase a tremendous amount of Use synonyms
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luxuries. Young Correct article usage
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people
affected by materialism prefer to buy products of expensive brands inclusive of Use synonyms
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celebrities
may take unreasonable Use synonyms
videos
onto social media websites involving Youtube and TikTok. Use synonyms
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videos
can attract many viewers to see and increase the click rates on the Internet.
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behaviors
for teenagers, Change the spelling
behaviours
celebrities
should set an example to donate their Use synonyms
wealth
to charities. Use synonyms
In addition
, governments are supposed to establish a law to control illegal Linking Words
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on social media websites and punish those who violate Use synonyms
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. In that way, not only Add an article
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celebrities
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also
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.
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celebrities
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on
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, teenagers may show off their Linking Words
wealth
and make unreasonable Use synonyms
videos
on social media websites because of these Use synonyms
celebrities
. If Use synonyms
celebrities
donate money to charities and governments establish legislation to punish Use synonyms
people
who upload illegal Use synonyms
videos
onto the Internet, youngsters can follow the remarkable steps of their Use synonyms
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celebrities
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